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Illusionist of the Metaphysical Marionettes

09/08/05 03:23 PM

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2_13_002_00.avi (1896k)
2_13_002_NeverTrust_FIX
1 continuity on bogie from the last shot is a little off from the previous shot, bogie should be moving in a little faster at the top of the shot
2 delgo pelvis is a little stiff overall and he doesnt really move up and down enough like when he hunches and such
3 at end delgo seems to be baring lower teeth instead of upper teeth
4 get a little more head move on delgo when he is looking down at bogie''s finger in his chest and also bend his left arm a little on this instead of having it go straight- makes it feel strange and casual
5 bogie [trust] is a little late
6 delgo on [you''re] needs more [ooo] shape
7 delgo on [yeah] needs to open his mouth more to project
8 get more disgust on delgo''s face as he slaps bogie''s arm away






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