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Apprentice of Theatrical Vim And Harmony

10/06/04 06:22 PM

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Shot: 1_02_012 Name: Start Date: 10-06-2004 End Date: 10-07-2004 Number of Hours: 6 Shot Duration: 9.5 seconds Artist: diaz Complexity: 3 Notes:

08/20/04 04:24 PM
sedessa-
eyes pop around 60
hair pops at beginning and isnt moving enough elsewhere
sedessa is looking too high up in her head when she is tilting her head down and looking forward, seeing too much white in the eye
reference new sedessa, her mouth shapes are a litte weak, especially like W on will. behind seems to be missing a sylable and shape

brute- try to get more deformations on his mouth
tongue should come up on forgot and built
turn on his teeth
he could use a blink or two

camera should track sedessa a little more, then pan over to brute better


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