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notes:
1 bogie hair penetrating ground
2 bogie left arm should be out with charm
next to his hand to match the previous shot
3 bogie wings arent on
4
is sword on?
5 delgo looks a little pose-to-pose overall. shen he first
looks up at kyla his head snaps up fast and his back doesnt move up at
all.
5 when delgo looks down into his hand at the beginning, have him
start with more concern, eyes open, then close his eyes, furrow and squint,
very sad
5a delgo hand adjustment at the very end is weird, why does he
twist it?
6 turn on kyla brooch
7 since bogies arm is now out, kyla
might need to be fudged a little to keep her from kneeling on bogies hand-
it would be best to get her to put her right hand on his hand on the
ground
8 on second time she says bogardus she should do another little
lean or something that shows in her body that she is speaking
9 kyla
looks a little poppy- i think the two small steps is the main thing that
looks poppy
10 make sure
there is secondary on her bangs and ponytail
11 filo back and root is a
little too isolated stiff when he is lowering his hat
12 check his right
arm, looks like there are a couple of pops
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