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still working on this
Notes:
11/02/04 20:05 PM
1 frame 122-126 filo looks right at camera- keep it more screen right
2
changing the beginning some. instead of the hand flapping thing, have filo
with a fake smile and a cheesy wave at bogie as he track him more to screen
left, watching bogie fly away, then when he is confortable he is out of
earshot, he turns quickly to delgo and does the ar you nuts thing
immediately. he doesnt have to see that delgo is thinking about it, he
already knows delgo has said he is going with him.
3 when filo says are
you nuts he should bend a little more with the lumbar, less form the
thoracic
4 on the gesture for lets get out of here i dont really like the
pose with the arms up to the side- maybe just do a little arm freak out or
something
5 on the were dead pose, i think his hands come up too high or
something, looks forced and strange.
6 lipsync needs a lot of work. he
seems to just be opening his jaw and never forming many phonemes clearly.
shows a lot of teeth
7 pouch
and slingshot on filo need secondary and hat could use some movement
8
filo needs a lot of refinement in general, but dont change any of the major
poses unless noted above.
9 delgo posture is really wacked out, leaning
back way too much and his arms are out to the side funny, dont think you
finished him.
10 delgo should be tracking bogie as he flies off like filo
is, then as filo starts ranting, he should actually turn towards him, so we
are basically over the shoulder more like you see in shot 010
11 when
filo says free delgo should wipe his face like filo spittled on it
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