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Apprentice of Theatrical Vim And Harmony

02/22/05 04:39 PM

File(s):
1_01_024_00_filoEnters(fix).avi (4131k)
1_01_024_00_Old.avi (16001k)
1_01_024_00_filoEnters(fix)
Update, I adjusted several things here so I'm putting the old one and the new one so you can check them out.



Shot: 1_01_024 Name: TryYourself Start Date: 02-21-2005 End Date: 02-22-2005 Number of Hours: 10 Shot Duration: 12 seconds Artist: diaz Complexity: 3 Notes:

02/14/05 16:30 PM
1 move the first flyer much later so he passes them around frame 225 instead of being so cramped at the beginning of the shot
2 stone should drop when delgo looks away when filo first starts speaking
3 the merchant should look at filo when delgo looks at him then look at his hand when the rock falls into it. then he can sort of give it a little shake wondering what happened to it.
4 delgo shouldnt look over at filo when he stomps his feet, just keep looking at merchant, sort of giggling, and stomp without looking. its not really reading that delgo is stomping his foot, probably need to shift his weight more in anticipation instead of moving his hand so much.
5 delgo needs to be more exressive, like making his brows and smile really pop on [confused] then getting much more cocked brow on [dropped on his head] line
6 delgo talk more out of the side of his mouth on [dropped on his head as a baby]
7 filo brows should furrow around [hey, what did i do?]



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