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1_01_024_00_filoEnters(fix)
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Update, I adjusted several things here so I'm putting the old one and the
new one so you can check them out.
Shot: 1_01_024
Name: TryYourself
Start Date: 02-21-2005
End Date: 02-22-2005
Number of Hours: 10
Shot Duration: 12 seconds
Artist: diaz
Complexity: 3
Notes:
02/14/05 16:30 PM
1 move the first flyer much later so he passes them around frame 225 instead
of being so cramped at the beginning of the shot 2 stone should drop when
delgo looks away when filo first starts speaking 3 the merchant should
look at filo when delgo looks at him then look at his hand when the rock
falls into it. then he can sort of give it a little shake wondering what
happened to it. 4 delgo shouldnt look over at filo when he stomps his
feet, just keep looking at merchant, sort of giggling, and stomp without
looking. its not really reading that delgo is stomping his foot, probably
need to shift his weight more in anticipation instead of moving his hand so
much. 5 delgo needs to be more exressive, like making his brows and smile
really pop on [confused] then getting much more cocked brow on [dropped on
his head] line 6 delgo talk more out of the side of his mouth on [dropped
on his head as a baby] 7 filo brows should furrow around [hey, what did i
do?]
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