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Update
Shot: 1_01_024
Name: TryYourself
Start Date: 03-24-2005
End Date: 03-25-2005
Number of Hours: 5
Shot Duration: 12 seconds
Artist: diaz
Complexity: 3
Notes:
02/27/05 11:46 AM
1 delgo eyes go white 112 to 118 or so, just looking way too far over at
filo
2 delgo body movement on the stomp seems slow, too much time to
anticipate and the down isnt timed with the leg very well
3 merchant-just
take the shaking off the left hand, its a little odd and there is so much
going on it isnt necessary
4 around frame 136 the merchants left shoulder
moves back odd.
5 dont have the merchant look back at filo after frame
231, just have him still looking at delgo so that when delgo leans in to say
his line to the merchant is already looking at him and just leans in a
little. its feeling rushed right now and looks like delgo starts talking to
the side of the merchants head
6 delgo is turning and smiling too soon
after filo comes in- he turns back and smile before filo has even said
[gettin pretty good at that] so have delgo continue looking at filo until
about 102 and then turn and have that good sheepish smile as he is stomping
filo''s foot (right
now he looks sort of angry on the stop)
7 when he is saying [dropped on
his head] the corner of his mouth should go up instead of down, feels like a
sneer instead of talking out of the side of his mouth
03/09/05 14:30 PM
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03/09/05 14:33 PM
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