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Kyla's voice needs editing out
Notes:
03/15/05 12:40 PM
1 we need to lengthen this shot by 3 seconds before delgo says anything. he
should be thinking...this is not known by the audience right now, but for
subtext, delgo actually has the brooch and he has held onto it without
telling her he as it as a possible bargaining chip, but he realizes that he
cant give it to her now or he would look like a slimeball, but he feels bad
too, so he is trying to decide if he should say something or how he should
deal with it...
2 he comes to a decision and looks up and calls to
kyla-this is in the shot now but needs a little tweaking because he says her
name before he raises his hand which feels werid, he should shake his head
and raise his hand as he looks up and then call her name
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