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so far
1 camera move is way too conservative. it seems to really average out the
motion, it should track more up and down with delgo. for example, you should
see the imp getting kicked over and at the end, we should have delgo pretty
much from head to toe in framing instead of having all the dead space at top
of frame- it just feels like we are missing the action.
2 delgo needs to
jump up off the razorwing- right now it feels like he is just falling
3
razorwing feels stiff coming in, i know you dont have a lot to work with
given the space, but try having it tails still bent like it is on the first
few frames as it passes by the window so it doesnt feel straight.
4 shot
now ends at frame 65, we are working that into the next shot so it cuts on
action
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