Posted by:
Illusionist of the Metaphysical Marionettes

07/07/05 03:19 PM

File(s):
2_31_008_009_010.avi (1204k)
2_31_009_exchangCU2_FIX
008, 009, 010

Notes:

04/12/05 17:20 PM


1.Doesn't match last shot - R wings, B wings, R body position, B moving fast at end of last shot but still at top of this one.
2.Doesn't feel like B sword hits R sword
3.Could use slight expression shift on R face
4.Separation of two at end feels awkward. Seems like what we want is the swords to hit each other hard and push both fighters back. Instead it feels like there is no force from the hit last hit (if it even hits at all) and they both float straight backward voluntarily.
5.Seems like B stops moving backward on the last few frames but he's still moving backward on the top of the next shot. Feels like a hitch between the shots.



Posted by:
Illusionist of the Metaphysical Marionettes

07/11/05 12:22 PM

File(s):
2_31_008_009_010.avi (1204k)
2_31_009_exchangCU2_FIX
trimmed shot 008 to smooth it out


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