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1 holding the spear wrong for continuity at beginning of shot
2 delgo
should throw the spear a lot less violently, more just frustrated, and throw
it as soon as he finishes saying [do something] instead of waiting a beat to
throw it
3 first turn is a little slunky, he seems to tak an extra step
or two
4 shoulders on [sit there] go down too far
5 there are a few
spots where his pelvis isnt rotating enough when his upper torso is
rotating- you can tell by looking at the belt, in certain areas the torso is
twistig a lot but it is still)
6 this might change a little because he
wont rotate so much when he throws the spear, but starting at 145 delgo''s
feet or sort of pointig the wrong way until about 275 when he adjust them.
its making his stance look odd
7 on [of all people, you] change it so he
doesnt gesture with both hands. you can have both hands come up, but just
keep his right hand close to his chest as he gestures with his left hand and
keep it a lit
tle higher instead of sweeping it so low
8 around 129 delgo''s right
wrist is too bent, let it hang a little more straight
9 get rid of
gesture on [its the nohrin]. just dont have any point at all
10 get a
little subtle movement on marley''s mouth/nose
11 from 90 to 190
marley''s right hand seems to move really linearly with the wrist not
rotating at all and fingers too stiff
12 delgo [you] and [rocks] gestures
are a little late
13 sync issues on [nohrin that need to be taught a
lesson], [of all] and [sit around] seem wonky but its a little small to tell
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