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1 Valtac needs to match 158 of the last shot at the top of this one.
2
Missing cauldron pieces from previous shot. These will need to match as
well.
3 See shot 6, note that the pickax is not quite in the right place
You can use the lines on the floor as a guide to place it properly.
4
Sedessa's turn is too angular around 18. Pay particular attention to the
left leg from 16-30. i think if you can ease it so she is coming around the
base of the stairs slightly the whole time instead of just makeing a turn it
would help alleviate this problem
5 Sedessa seems to be looking down
instead of at Delgo.
6 Can't tell what expression Sedessa has (if any),
but it needs to be one of sinister confidence.
7 Delgo's back penetrates
his vest.
8 have sedessa starting to nove her hand down to grab her
dagger as shot is nearingh an end- should be a suave slow move, not anything
quick or desperate
9 Feels like Delgo overshoots the axe, but maybe this
can be fixed whe
n addressing comment #3 above.
Delgo needs some facial expression
10
at the beginning of the shot delgo should have been controlling the stone
that was buzzing around valtac in the background, so that stone needs to
drop as delgo stops controlling it at beginning of shot because sedessa is
approaching
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