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Only so far
No lypsync yet
Not adjusted chest yet, need to tweak kylas fingers
Notes:
09/12/05 17:15 PM
1 at beginning of shot kyla''s hands should be more locked, they are
probably penetrating now anyway. make sure they arent totally locked
tho
2 her hands snap to her hips and also they get into the pose too
early, looking robotic. BUT i want to try to have them pose differently
anyway. if this doesnt work, make sure we can go back to this version and
massage it, but try having the more typically feminine pose of her fingers
behind her and thumbs at her side- i can give you a reference picture if
needed. or maybe a video, woot
3 delgo''s left arm seems a little stiff-
i think it is that when he is gesturing he keeps the elbow too close to his
body the whole time, it can move out some duringt he gestures. also, might
need a little more shoulder movement. at end when he drops his hand, it only
seems to rotate from the elbow, too
4 [please] doesnt close mouth quite
soon enough. [the guy] feels a little off sync and something in [caught]
looks like the shapes are off-
seems like i see an [m] shape. might just be too much purser in there
5
delgo back is too arched on the first half. he starts out on frame 1 very
natural, then he starts sticking his chest out and it stays like that for
the first half of the shot. i would have him more natural (like frame 1) and
then just lean back on [please] for flair, then do it again when he says
[guy caught me off guard], then leaning back over
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