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Might need to tweak lyps
1 when kyla looks down arfound 138, her eyes look a little odd
2 kyla''s
got some weird stuff happening on her hair on the sides. i dont think it
should really be animated out to the sides
3 when kyla says [your people
need you] instead of having her hands come back and making fists, have her
move her hands towards delgo, palms up. and then when she drops her arms
after the gesture her left arm is dropping too quickly
4 after she points
on [father] she has a little secondary gesture that is unneccesary- it looks
fluid how the hand comes back up after the point but keep the hand in the
pointing gesture as she says [needs you]
5 the [th] of [father] seems a
little late or something
6 kyla looks like she is sitting on a stool
because her legs seem bent forward and sort of spread apart
7 kyla mouth
on [father] seems a little wide, especially how high the upper lip is and
the corners seem too far back on [needs]
8 when kyla takes delgo''s hand
in hers her
finger penetrates his hand
9 kyla should look up more at the end when
she say''s [i need you] because it looks like she isnt really looking him in
the eye. she should also raise her brows more and maybe raise her upper lip
a little as she says it and as she looks at him, a bit of an endearing wince
of hope.
10 when kyla turns back towards him before she says [i need you]
her eyes look a little vacant. might want to lead the head more and have the
blink on the turn
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