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1 continuity on bogie from the last shot is a little off from the previous
shot, bogie should be moving in a little faster at the top of the shot 2
delgo pelvis is a little stiff overall and he doesnt really move up and down
enough like when he hunches and such 3 at end delgo seems to be baring
lower teeth instead of upper teeth 4 get a little more head move on delgo
when he is looking down at bogie''s finger in his chest and also bend his
left arm a little on this instead of having it go straight- makes it feel
strange and casual 5 bogie [trust] is a little late 6 delgo on
[you''re] needs more [ooo] shape 7 delgo on [yeah] needs to open his
mouth more to project 8 get more disgust on delgo''s face as he slaps
bogie''s arm away
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