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Early Blocking, havent done anything to Delgo yet..
Shot: 2_14_008
Name: AreYouCrazy
Start Date: 03-16-2005
End Date: 03-18-2005
Number of Hours: 25
Shot Duration: 16 seconds
Artist: diaz
Complexity: 2
Notes:
03/09/05 15:10 PM
1 filo''s acting is pretty good but i think that polishing this, which has
many faily subtle mechanical problems would be very difficult, so i would
rather have you start from scrath with the same basic gestures. kott tried
cleaning it up before but it is very difficult to work with someone else''s
scene when it is so long and involved. the other shot you did after this
worked well so i feel you could get a similar performance on this one the
only acting thing that is really not quite working for me is the beginning
when filo finishes waving and then asks delgo if he is nuts- he should snap
from the wave to talking to delgo much more quickly, so its a real pop. 2
at beginning make sure delgo and filo are both looking up at hte same place
(feel a little off right now) and they track a little further screen left to
get that feeling of tracking better. 3 delgo overall feels floaty because
he is moving quite slowly, his turns and his reaction to getting spit on are
a
ll too slow. his expression at the beginning seems pretty flat. maybe make
him react more to bogie''s [we''ll see about that] comment. give him maybe a
little head nod, as if to say [yeah we will].
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